The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, we congratulate ourselves on our "generosity" but it would really be generosity if we gave UP some of our prosperity rather than handing it down. Good job.
A truly, truly satisfying read! Soul-searching, too. Great job!
Good entry - I liked the twist at the end - she's not quite as regenerate as she likes to think, is she? Cleverly told.
What a true ring this story has. Haven't we all, at one time or another, been guilty of giving out of wrong headed motivations at times? So often our "gifts" come with strings attached; proper gratitude; returned favors; bragging rights and so much more. Maybe even, sometimes, it out of a desire to make sure someone else gets put in their place(?). :>) I loved the inner reflection and honesty of your character. Nice job.
I really liked how your title reflected the novel's title from the first sentence. And the zinger at the end was a great touch.
fantastic! what a terrific read. I loved the ending. Not predictable and kinda stabs you right in the gut. Terrific, easy to read writing. great messages. be proud. this is great!
May take away? Motives are EVERYTHING!! Well done! :-)