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Wow, what a great depiction of a well known story. You wrote it beautifully. Great job!
Awesome depiction. I enjoyed getting in the mind of Zaccheus.
05/13/06
Very imaginative, you set the background up for Zacchaeus' encounter with Jesus with great skill, making a well known story resonate with new meaning. Well done.
05/13/06
Excellent "it could have happened this way". Good job.
Beautiful. I could feel his emotions as he wanted to meet Jesus. Good job.
05/18/06
A well-known story interestingly told. You painted a fascinating picture of the lead-up to Zacchaeus' meeting with Jesus in a very convincing way. Great job.
05/18/06
Great angle of a well known story. We all know the story of Christ looking up into the tree, but to look down from it into the eyes of Eternal Hope Himself. Masterfully done through a beautiful window.
05/18/06
Great piece. Well done.
Nice character development! You hooked me with those first two sentences (good intro) and I stayed hooked to the end. :-)