The Official Writing Challenge
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This is love in action.
Thank you for sharing it.
This is one of those haunting pieces that makes me fall on my face. Would I have grace to give my life to such love? "But her smile, no matter how weak she has become, is the sunshine for which I grope in this prison." Simply and magnificently written!
Such love! I envy those that can work with people who really need them! I wish, I hope, I dream of that other world - where there will be no more tears, no more death, no more sickness. Well done and God Bless.
Brilliant. Loved the message, loved the medium
Vivid - well done - exceptional. Thank you.
This tore at my heart. A terrible testimony to consequences of the evil that men do. But wonderfully written. Great work.
This is an awesome story. Your descriptions were amazing. I LOVED it. It was so graphic. You could feel her pain and struggle. GOOD JOB!
I was pulled right into the story. The message came through strong. Great entry.
Well done. Such a sad, beautiful story.