The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
What, no comments? You must be going crazy (I would be!) I love it. It really got my head into Jochabed's. How she must have mingled tears with that pitch. Great stuff, hope it does well.
05/08/06
I have always gotten a bit of a chuckle from this story (call me weird). Moses' mother DID do what Pharoah had ordered — she put her son in the river. But, as she did it, she could have sung the song "I Did It My Way" or, better said, God's way, Good writing.
Wonderful telling of this great classic Bible story! Creative take on 'love', but an obvious choice all at the same time. I really enjoyed this!!
05/08/06
Beautiful Love story! and wonderful descriptive telling of it.
05/08/06
Such sacrifice and love, of a mother for her child. Mirium's faith still amazes me. You have touched me with your writing. Bless you!
You drew a great word picture of a familiar story, yet made it so fresh.
05/10/06
I love it when Bible stories come to life and you did just that! You put us there and carried us along. Excellent!