The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/06
a good gospel tract, and a great way to make the gospel even more understandable!

05/06/06
Wonderful, and very well done. All-dialog is hard to do, but by giving both of your characters such distinct personalities, you nailed it. Bravo!
05/07/06
What an ingenious story! If I'd tried for a hundred years I'd never have come up with a gospel message from a sock sretcher! Like it very much - great dialogue.
Very good. I liked the humor, the dialogue. Creative angle. Well done!
05/08/06
Nice analogy!
05/10/06
Loved it! What a fantastic way to show and tell about Love! And creative too. The two voices, the preacher and the teen, were done so well - it was as though the Writer had been there & done that! Good job!
05/13/06
Patience, my friend. The sock stretchers get rescued thats redemption. They get changed thats conversion. Then its time to work away at making that conversion something beautiful that people can see thats sanctification, and its a long process. Youll see.

Lynda, I love this! Everything explained in a nutshell. This goes in my "favorites!"