The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the story. it had a good moral to it. The "ss's" wre a good idea and made for an interesting creative way of keeping the interest.
Sweet story!!
This was a delightful story with a fine message about being selfish - right on target with the theme! May God continue to bless you with your writing, and I do hope you are planning to reach out with this story (and hopefully many others) to the children of the world. I can almost see the book, now!! In Christ's name, ladybug Karen
I liked the sss too, make me read it like a fish talking under water! Cute story!
This was so cute! Good job.