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This was terrific. Satan and his demons are so wicked. I loved the whole thing- only the prayer didn't really sound "like her." Would have liked to have heard her sounding more like her teenage self as she prayed. Regardless, an excellent story. I liked it.
You had me glued to the screen! Great story and message!
Very nicely written! How the devil loves to play on our weaknesses. There is a spelling error in the third paragraph, but you've probably already spotted it!
I liked this a lot. I liked the way you exposed the schemes of the devil. That's exactly how he operates...
Good job! Kate~