The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/06
Oh, I really like this. Very creative and unique. Great work!
Wow. Just wow. You have a way of building an emotional bridge to your readers! Very well written!
02/16/06
Well, this is just perfect. I'm blown away.
02/17/06
Beautiful! Poetic! Salvation painted in words and fantastic imagery. Very touching - just beautiful!
02/17/06
This really does read like a classic poetic story. Very well done, polished, paced well. Strong entry. Good work!
02/18/06
Wonderful images - this was very well done!
02/18/06
This was so beautiful. What a glorious description of crossing over to God's side. Just One Step was just wonderful!
02/18/06
Wonderful. I kept willing your character to make the step, knowing what it was like on the pther side. It was a very clear picture that you presented us with.