The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Please pretend you didn't see my name, it was an accident.
01/17/05
Beautiful poem! A tribute!
01/17/05
Beautiful poem spoken from a Mothers heart.
01/17/05
Brings me right back to holding my own. Very well put together.
01/17/05
Wendy,
What a sweet way to tell of a mother's first maternal love. Nicely chosen words and beautiful imagery.
Jo
01/18/05
This is beautiful,first borns are truly special.
Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
Very nice poem about your firstborn. Frankly, Wendy, I'm glad you said your name and don't understand why we no longer know who we are reading, especially since we're not voting any longer.
Precious! I relived those first moments with you.
01/20/05
I love the sentiments you express. I think there are some lines where the rhythmn needs tightening up slightly.
A truly beautiful poem about the birth of your first born son. Great word pictures expressing the heart of a new mother. Very well told.God bless you.
Beautifully done, Wendy. Flowed well and the subject, of course, was great. God bless you.
01/23/05
nice, very nice...would make a great greeting card