The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
This was a delightful read! The only glitch was that you mentioned the drive to Birmingham (which made us think you were already well on your way) and then we were back in your driveway. I LOVED it when you put the top down, though. Your description had me sitting in the driver's seat, enjoying the beautiful day. I needed that today (my daughter's bus was cancelled today due to the snow).
02/10/06
I laughed at your swithching the wrong controls because of being in a different car ... can't we all identify! Well done.
Left me thinking about control...and how it comes and goes circumstantially. AND YET, supernatural control is constant if we only yield to it! Enjoyed the spider especially....as well as the retractable roof. :-)