The Official Writing Challenge
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Intriguing concept, but I would like to read more on how the white noise affects the mind. This would probably make a good longer story.
I agree, more of the white noise stuff would be interesting.
Nice way to present the information - in letter format.
I'm not sure if I like the implication that the Holy Spirit "controls" our minds in the sense that we have no original thoughts of our own. God did not make us puppets, we have free will and free choice and can certainly think for ourselves. Perhaps though, I misunderstood your point -were you referring more to the way the Holy Spirit communicates with us, and how we respond to him? Regardless, this was an interesting read! I too enjoyed the letter format. Very clever.