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Topic: Control (01/30/06)
- TITLE: Who's in Control?
By dub W
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“Hush, Ollie, you’ll know the signal.” Oliver Mason was a new body in our short patrol; fresh out of high school and thirty days out of basic. He was a big kid, so we strapped him with an M-60, and two belts of ammunition. With four grenades hanging off of his flak jacket he looked like a metal cow on two legs. He also had a big wad in his back pocket.
“Ollie,” I whispered, “what’s in your pocket?”
“Man, you fall on you tail and you’ll kill us all, have some self control.”
Nunez the Rat took two steps to the left of Ollie and glared back at his heavily armed comrade. The Rat held an unlit cigarette between his lips, but he sucked on it like a baby’s bottle. Nunez was a slight kid, about nineteen years old, perfect for poking down tunnels. He was always nervous about tunneling, but followed orders. I liked to say he was controlling the underground. I think he was still deaf and stunned from discharging the 45 in a tunnel earlier in the afternoon, but we needed every warm body we could find on the line that night.
I had the Tremor Dog on my right, not a four-legged one, but a man of unusual viciousness and totally uncaring. I didn’t know much about him, except I wanted him next to me. I had seen him rip through a charge of our dark enemy – his M-16 chattering from his right hip and a stolen AK firing from his left hand. He wore the notches on his knife handle like a badge of honor. Often at night he left camp only to return in the morning with another notch. Nobody controlled the dog.
Reynolds, the lieutenant, was on the end of the row with Big “O,” the radio guy. They were both new, simply replacements for body bags. I think Reynolds got a commission from a cereal box, I had spent most of my off minutes teaching him the art of surviving. On paper, Lieutenant Reynolds was in control.
Big “O” the radio guy was a communications specialist. Somebody told me he was a disc jockey before the draft. He controlled our communications back to the line.
The only other member of our team was Liam our forward man. He was buried under some brush - just before the wire. If the perimeter was breached he was to sit up with the 50 and begin shooting from the rear. Hopefully, his friendly fire would not find one of us. He controlled the back side. Also, if we were all down, he was to run to our line before the enemy caught him.
The sparks from the flare descended from the sky. I peeked through my scope at the wire, nothing was moving. I could feel my heart rate slow. “Martin Luther” never was in this situation.” I slid down the trench beside Ollie. I could see his eyes peering beneath helmet. Big white circles circled in black grease. He kind of looked like a raccoon.
“Relax Ollie, everything is under control.” I tipped my helmet back.
Nobody heard it coming, nobody saw the sky split, and nobody expected the end. But, there it was, at least for us. I didn’t hear the explosion, didn’t feel my body being lifted out of the trench; indeed what I have said so far had to be told to me later.
The only thing I remember was a voice whispering to me. “Who’s in control now?”
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