The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written with a good message. I couldn't see anything that could improve it :)
You did a great job of retelling this story and reminded me even the heroes of the Bible struggled at time. I needed this message right now and you touched my heart.
11/28/21
You've shown a great grasp of the biblical background to Mark's story. I realise that it's hard to top a first placing, but I feel it would have even more impact in the first person - similar to your monologues - thoughb without any netion of staging the message. But yes, it's hard to beat a first placing... ;-)
11/28/21
Let's try again - this time without the unnnoticed typos: "I feel it would have even more impact in the first person - similar to your monologues - though without any mention of staging the message." :-)