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Good writing! So much emotion in your words, such tragic history. We who are Christians need to stand with Israel in these troubled times.
You've drawn me back to Yad Vashem - the Holocaust museum in Jerusalem - an indescribable experience of unspeakable horrors.
Well written. It kept my interest to the end. I couldn't see anything that could improve it :)
This is absolutely stunning. You do an outstanding job of using salsa (words that pop) verbs (trundle, slump, trek, hesitate) that bring your words to life and paints a vivid picture. This is a powerful piece and touched my heart.