The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/21
Good writing! So much emotion in your words, such tragic history. We who are Christians need to stand with Israel in these troubled times.
07/30/21
You've drawn me back to Yad Vashem - the Holocaust museum in Jerusalem - an indescribable experience of unspeakable horrors.
Well written. It kept my interest to the end. I couldn't see anything that could improve it :)
This is absolutely stunning. You do an outstanding job of using salsa (words that pop) verbs (trundle, slump, trek, hesitate) that bring your words to life and paints a vivid picture. This is a powerful piece and touched my heart.