The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/21
I am fascinated by history so I enjoyed this story being set in pre Revolutionary War times. I was left with a lot of questions how old is William? Where do they live? One small thing sometimes William calls his father Pa and other times Father. I see this story as a seed full of promise but has a lot of developing to do and with probably far more words than the writing challenge allows. God bless you as you continue to tell the story of William and his father.