The Official Writing Challenge
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04/08/21
This was a great article. Just reading it was like being there.
A minor correction: in the 15th paragraph you have, "so they do." I think you meant, "and so they did."
KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING!
04/09/21
Excellent! This is very believable and relatable. And encouraging. Good job!
You wrote as if you were there too. Thanks for that visualization.
This was an interesting POV. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 11th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
04/15/21
A wonderful retelling of Jesus resurrecting Lazarus from the grave. Congratulations on placing 1st in your division and 12th overall.