The Official Writing Challenge
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I remember the true story of this flight. Thanks for reminding us who is really in control.
You did a great job of retelling the story. I remember that day clearly and can't imagine the fear and faith on that plane. I'd have loved to seen more body language, thoughts, and dialog. Even though this is a true story, you can add these things and make it into a historical fiction piece. Your message is clear and you nailed the topic. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 16 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.