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11/19/20
A terrific well thoughtout article. The price of sin!!
11/19/20
I liked your postscript - making a well known story all too applicable today
Just wow! I hope this places high!
You did an awesome job of bringing extra details into the familiar Bible story. It makes it easier to understand how both husband and wife changed and fell for the serpent's tricks. The ending was powerful too, pulling me thousands of years forward to today's world.
11/25/20
You do a good job of getting inside the narrative and bringing out the emotions that Adam and Eve must have felt, as well as the gulf that spoiled their relationship with God and with each other.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.