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Wow! That is a wonderful revival.
I love this. I definitely wanted more.
Blessings and Gratitude
Full of emotion. Thank you for sharing.
A powerful and moving description of a crisis. I was struck by the connection you made in the last verse – two women kneeling and praying, two thousand years apart and yet somehow emotionally and spiritually close. Thank you.
Good job on writing a powerful picture.
Well done~~.
I enjoyed this work. The author very effectively places us in the center of an unfolding emergency which one out of every five of us and our families will face in our lifetimes. Like another member of his family we are told of the intervention in progress and its its graphic effects, and of the power, belief and action in prayers of the mother being just as holy as another mother's dedication in her decision not to abandon her son as He hung dying upon the cross. A very real, emotional and vivid description of these events that we can all relate to, and ending with a prayer answered and a life restored. Very well done.