The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your title, and how you re-told this familiar parable.
A story that bears repeating.
This was a good idea of a story to retell. And I liked it however it would be much more powerful and impactful if you took one of the characters on as the voice and let us live it out with them. All the senses could be engaged in this story.
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