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08/27/20
I was surprised that it was fictional because there are so many that experience similar loneliness. Good article.
08/27/20
I enjoyed the realistic and touching details in your description. The idea that the home becomes an "empty labyrinth" is a striking one. Thank you.
08/27/20
Amazing story! Oh it touched my heart and made my eyes fill up. It was poignant, touching and simply beautifully written and expressed.

This held an authentic tone.

Thanks for sharing,

Blessings~
08/28/20
Such a poignant story, and I hope this places. Well done!
08/30/20
I was there with Rose. Thank you.
09/02/20
Good job of writing a believable story. It was easy to imagine.
09/05/20
Congrats!
Blessings~