The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fascinating testimony you have!
I hope you keep working on this piece. Your point at the end about the heart condition is significant but lacks the punch I believe you can give it. This is well-written--and has the potential of being a powerful message with just a little reworking.
It hurts me a lot that some are treated differently because of their skin color. It is so unfair. Someday Jesus will correct that!!
Good story! A little editing here and there and you have a great story line. I was a little confused in the middle where you were going. Keep writing.