The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written. Thank you.
I like how you led us to believe he gave up and was falling to his death, only discover he was
just giving up the climb for that day.
07/18/20
You set a very tense scene with your writing. I thought for sure he was a gonner. I love good the uplifting ending, too. Great job.