The Official Writing Challenge
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This part of the story of Joel is unfamiliar to me, but it sounds convincing. I must make time to read it. Thanks for sharing it. It was well written.
This is interesting - well written and kept my attention from the very beginning.
Oh, very good! The only jarring note was the slip into 2nd person in the 3rd paragraph. This was a wonderful approach to the topic, and your ending was just fabulous.
A very interesting story -well written.
The grass may wither and the flower fade away, but the Word of the Lord shall stand. This story says to me that we should only rely on God and not other things. He will bring all things to our remembrance at the appropriate time. Great article.
Well written and interesting, thank you.
Very tight ... good writing.. polished, obviously by a pro. The story line is right on and teaches a great message.
The only Joel I know was Old Testament - so I assume this is fiction; but wonderfully and beautifully done! Well written and kept my interest throughout. A masterful read.
I loved it.