The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the opening story. But your second half did not segue very well to your point. Perhaps you could say something about the tired worn out old clown continues through life, and often I do the same. Does that make sense? Good job on the story, and keep up the good work writing.
02/21/20
You set up the first story very well great description and visualization of the old tired clown.

Good job with the topic.

Thanks for sharing "your" story and scripture verses.

Blessings~
02/27/20
Congrats!
Blessings~
02/27/20
I LOVED the opening hook! However, I do agree that a transition was necessary between the literal clowns and your personal experience. It was a great read!