The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting analogy on clowns being a distraction. I'd not considered that before.

I do find that all the Bible references detracts from the telling of your entry. Have you tried to just use an asterisk, and put the references at the bottom?

You do know your Bible!
I absolutely loved your entire entry as my favorite style of writing is devotional based.

It was well developed, informative, and defined circumstances that relate to the Word as it pertains to the world today, and you've managed to bring it all home in a powerful way.

Great scripture verses to tie it into the topic.


Thought this was fabulous!