The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/20
Glad you can wake up from nightmares!

Just a couple of points - it is breathe, not breath. Also, it should be borne and not bore. Finally, in one verse you change tense from past to present.
For sure a very unpleasant dream!
01/13/20
The worst kind of dream. A few spelling distractions but good prose.