The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your vivid descriptions and how you brought this story to life. Well done!
12/12/19
I could visualize this scene so clearly. I can't imagine what it would be like for his disciples to see Jesus again after they thought Him dead.
12/12/19
I don't think I've ever realized how many water, beach scenes there are in Peter's experience with Jesus. It was neat to see them all together.
12/13/19
Very descriptive. It drew me in and I didn't struggle to visualize the scene. Keep up the good work.
I really liked the vivid images in your story.

When I had my pieces reviews. I learned that the judges usually like a different perspective than the actual bible verse.

Great writing.
12/14/19
Good job.
12/14/19
Very good and engaging retelling of this scripture story. It read seamlessly and put the reader in the moment. I enjoyed it!
Marilyn,

Congratulations on your EC Award.

I felt like I was with Peter on his journey.

Well Written!