The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your vivid descriptions and how you brought this story to life. Well done!
I could visualize this scene so clearly. I can't imagine what it would be like for his disciples to see Jesus again after they thought Him dead.
I don't think I've ever realized how many water, beach scenes there are in Peter's experience with Jesus. It was neat to see them all together.
Very descriptive. It drew me in and I didn't struggle to visualize the scene. Keep up the good work.
I really liked the vivid images in your story.

When I had my pieces reviews. I learned that the judges usually like a different perspective than the actual bible verse.

Great writing.
Good job.
Very good and engaging retelling of this scripture story. It read seamlessly and put the reader in the moment. I enjoyed it!

Congratulations on your EC Award.

I felt like I was with Peter on his journey.

Well Written!