The Official Writing Challenge
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Good use of illustrations for the topic.
Good writing, and it is perfect for the topic. We should all ask ourselves these questions!
Good, contemplative questions with a relevant and challenging application.
I really enjoyed your piece. It was well thought out, with scripture references, and well written. Also I think you captured Mary's and Peter's personalities and dilemmas. One thing I might have left out is referencing "jumping in with both feet," within your story. You did a good job of showing that instead of actually telling it. Either way it was a good story and I enjoyed reading it!
Congrats on your EC! :)