The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/19
First, I love the phrase crystalline smile. Had to look the word up. Second, I am not too familiar with the jargon of superheroes and law enforcement, so it lost me a little, but there is definitely a to-be-continued feel to it that had me go back and reread it!
11/21/19
Good beginning to a book!
11/21/19
I would like to know more about these characters...
So what happens next?
11/25/19
Seems like this story needs a book format to answer all my questions. I would like to know some back story as well as what happens next.