The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for sharing your heart.
Oftentimes, we must hit bottom before we are ready to reach up to Jesus!
Thanks for sharing the joy of a brand new beginning--there really is nothing like it. I liked how you shared he childhood memory that never left you. One small suggestion, punctuation marks go inside quotation marks. Good job!
Thanks for sharing from your heart. We all make some wrong choices but God forgives and shows us the way. Blessings!

This is good.

I feel like you could have expanded on this a bit more, perhaps.

Also, just a general word of advice... Any time you use song lyrics, check to make sure the song is in public domain, and I'd also give credit to the song in an author's note, with the song name, song writer/composer's name, and also the note that it's in the public domain.

I like how you showed the progression of your thinking.