The Official Writing Challenge
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Woah! I can imagine a lot of this really does happen! I love your last line- well done!
This is a great satire of how so many politicians seem to like to run their campaigns in today's world. I just heard about an ad that had unsubstantiated "facts" in it, yet still social media and networks ran the ad even though it was not true. Your story was a great fit.
10/11/19
Fantastic!
I love this piece!

Given the climate of what is going on in this world...this is ripe with truth.

Well done, and great writing.

Blessings~
10/15/19
Honestly, in the beginning, I thought the names were a little childish, but as I read through, I fully understood the point, and was charmed by it. It's a work of fiction, but again, you really identified the new form of news articles that hardly pass as journalism. Very well done!
10/17/19
Sooo much in the way of the world. Loved your 'names' and how you fit them in with character. Great job!
10/18/19
Totally enjoyed your entry. I'm reading Hannah Hurnards Hinds' Feet on High Places" in a new special visual edition, so your allegory held spacial significance.
Well done and congratulations.
10/24/19
This is SO well worth reading. Loved it.