The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the best out of the whole lot. I love it! I can "hear" the drawl, feel the emotion and gratitude, and "see" the scene. Wonderful entry! It makes my heart smile.
This piece caught and held my attention. I like that it was on topic without bonking me over the head with it. Keep writing.
You did a great job with the voice accents! What a wonderful story!
I was engaged with this from the very first sentence. What a genuine piece. I have always been puzzled about the relationship between slave and master, and it often seems, like in this case, that the children see beyond the color of their skin. While that may have been the main point, it still came through. Nice piece of writing.
Good job. I think I am drawn to it because I love to read so much.
Excellent job!
Well done,
This is an awesome story. You drew me in right away and held my attention to the very end. I learned a few things I didn't know as well. The message of God helping us to glorify him, even in horrible situations is still pertinent today. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!