The Official Writing Challenge
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I am so glad that God saved us, no matter what we are like!
the poem starts out well in first stanza, except 'crumbles', which fits more as 'is crumbling'. The line 'The answers hidden well' was confusing for me, as I thought at first 'well' was a place where you get water. Later I saw it as 'well hidden'. Thanks to God for saving us all.
09/18/19
Beautiful!
Blessings~