The Official Writing Challenge
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Open your home to all? Very risky, generous. Reminds me of Keith Green's ministry.

The names of hurricanes confused me. I kept thinking this Dorian was the one on the East coast yesterday.

Maybe a line describing each incident would help. 'Hurricane Dorian, the cat 4 in '99,' for example.

Very fresh, pertinent, and new.
09/05/19
This was an interesting read, although a bit confusing at times. I don't think you needed the last two sentences. The point was already made--very well:-).
I was not confused, as you addressed Dorian as three days ago and Matthew 3 years ago. Thank you for paying it forward, and I know you will do it with discernment. I have family and friends on the East coast and I appreciate that there are people like you who are available to help them should the need arise. One thing, though, you don't need to put the date in your entry, it will post with your title after you enter it.( It just adds to your word count.)
09/10/19
Great job, well done, thank you.
Good message!
Blessings~
09/12/19
Thank you all for your comments! I literally wrote this while preparing for Sir Dorian to blow by! Most "current" writing I've ever done!