The Official Writing Challenge
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This could be a very real situation today- so scary. I had to read a few times to understand it all. I think I got it that this was a supernatural wold? Who was Megawatt? What were the Christian costumes? I did think it foolish of the lawyer to loan money to her clients. But still, a very real possibility it today's world.
08/29/19
Very creative! Congratulations on a very good read!
09/02/19
This is creative.

I think some clue early that this was in an alternative setting would have been helpful. Maybe introduce "Megawatt" early on, and describe the costumes? I don't know.

Pretty good, over all.
09/03/19
Interesting scenario. I had to reread a couple of times to really follow the story and characters, though. Keep up the good work.
09/03/19
Interesting scenario. I had to reread a couple of times to really follow the story and characters, though. Keep up the good work.