The Official Writing Challenge
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Great surprises for all the world!
08/03/19
Nice!
08/03/19
Great job with the topic,
Blessings~
08/08/19
Good job tracing all the surprises throughout that time.

Red ink: separate dialogue into individual paragraphs and add more details to Joseph's perspective to make this even more effective.