The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/19
I bet more than a few people could relate to that Alter Call Experience, and you wrote with just the right amount of candor and conviction. I really enjoyed this piece.
Now I want to hear the rest of the story! What happened next? Well done.
08/03/19
I have to admit that tears came into my eyes while reading this. People everywhere are looking for the answer today when He is right in front of them.
08/03/19
Wow!
Powerful,
Blessings~
08/07/19
Touching and vulnerable story. Well done.

Some red ink: separate dialogue into individual paragraphs to make it easier to follow.
08/08/19
That resonated really well with me. Well done, and I have a son I would like that to happen to!! Blessings in abundance.