The Official Writing Challenge
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This has the start of a great story. I noted a few typos, but with closer editing, this could be a winner. I enjoyed the cultural comparisons. I've never heard the term "in my pocket."
07/21/19
Wonderful job with the topic, and a great story to boot.
You have a nice style of writing.
Thank you
Blessings~