The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/19
Wow! You really captured the essence of having to live with a mother-in-law under unfavorable circumstances. I loved the scripture reference in Elijah -thank goodness it's not copyrighted because I think I'm putting that in my arsenal-, but I loved how you demonstrated God's reward for obedience. Good story.
Good story on tolerance. Now, i'm not sure what the name was suppose to be, but it was written "brain" 4 times and Brian at least once. Easy to do! Keep on writing.
07/21/19
Excellent title, and such a powerfully written story.
Well done,

Blessings~