The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/19
Great story! Some punctuation editing needed, and then you'd have a publishable piece.
Great little vignette. I recall an old claymation TV program called Davey and Goliath. There was an event, a problem and the moral of the story. Your entry would well fit into that type genre.
The Justice League that lives in my head demands the victim to have a voice in this piece....LOL
but it would have been nice to have included the bullied in the story somehow? Maybe a phone call from the parent to thank Steven's parents? Just The Justice League's idea.
Blessings
You did a nice job with this story. It felt a bit old-fashioned, but the world definitely needs stories that encourage kids to stick up for each other without breaking the rules. Goid job.