The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/19
A great reminder to move on from our past regrets. Good writing. God bless.
Oh what self-blame you must have endured. I loved your line: "Thy kingdom come" without first saying "my kingdom go." That was great! I did see some typos. I learned that if your read your piece backwards, it's easier to catch typos, extra words and spacing issues. It's tedious, but it works! So glad that God forgives us so that we don't need to carry the blame.
And my statement had typos. :O
You make some great points in this piece. I've had many regrets as well and we never know when it might be the last time we see someone. I think your take on the topic was fresh and the message powerful. Good job.
05/21/19
Your story has a good message of not letting the past keep us down, but look to Jesus who gives us hope and grace.
Absolute necessary teaching here. Thanks for sharing. Blessings