The Official Writing Challenge
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Great take on the biblical story- you really brought it to life!
You did a nice job of bringing this story to life. I enjoy biblical fiction and often wonder how things might have been like. The verses you selected were a great pick to reinforce the message.
I love Biblical stories coming to life - and you certainly did that with this one. This could easily become a short skit. Super job! Blessings
Cleverly written and interwoven with Biblical view. Well done!
As a Biblical fiction fan I enjoyed this immensely. Keep up the good work. Blessings.