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Wow! I have goose-bumps and tears.Beautiful story and I sure hope this places!
Your story is poignant and inspirational at the same time. You told it beautifully, full of grace.
As a former RN this story not only saddens me but angers me. I can't imagine how people get so callous they forget to be humane. You drew me in right away and held my attention to the very end. I think you did a great job of covering the topic, not only in the sick, dying patient, but also in the horrific attitude of those who are charged with caring for the elderly. Thankfully not all places are like this, but sadly not all elderly can afford a decent place. You really handled a difficult topic nicely.
Oh my goodness. What horrible treatment for a dying person. You did a good job of drawing the reader in and holding them. Kudos.
Great story - compelling. Blessings
05/22/19
Great title. Nicely done and well written. A sad commentary on some of healthcare today. I could feel your love and compassion for Anna, and I was tearing up.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!