The Official Writing Challenge
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This is full of details. I can't even begin to imagine such a sight, but your words did bring a vivid vision to my mind and I felt tears gather as I read. This is a fresh take on the topic, but still spot on.
Your prose of such a sickening scene is truly beautiful, your descriptions are sensory, and the piece flows very, very well. Great job!
This is one of my favorites this week. Your descriptions are vivid. I could feel your despair as I read. Excellent work.
You had me standing on that beach with you the whole time. Great job! Blessings
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 17th overall. Happy Dance!