The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a sweet story!
05/13/19
Yes, a very sweet story! I was right there, meeting those children. I did notice an inconsistency between present and past tense. Otherwise though, a read that made me smile.
This is a great story. A challenge is to lose excess words and try and move some similes into metaphors. They have more punch. Well done! Blessings
This is adorable. I really enjoyed each little character. While the MC is busy sowing seeds, the little ones are sowing seeds of love, wonder, and excitement. I liked the double take on the sweet story.
Congratulations!!
Blessings!