The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful! Reminded me of that prayer by St. Francis of Assisi. Well done.
05/12/19
While I lay no claim to poetry expertise, I do like this. I love that it's written as a prayer, for seeds to be sown, naming the seeds and their respective targets.

Nicely done!

~Blessings.
This is a lovely poem. I'm not an expert at any poetry and I know often it is part of poetry to leave out unimportant words, especially in free verse. I'm sure it's just because I'm not good at poetry that I stumbled over a few lines and had to reread them. This is definitely a piece that feels stronger and touches me more each time I read it. I can feel the MC's passion and longing. It touched my heart and made me stop and think more than once. Good job.
From one poet to another - I loved it! Well done. Blessings
Congratulations, Caleb! If I remember correctly, this is your third Editor's Choice, so now you are in Masters! Double Congratulations! You've earned it.
Congratulations!!!
Blessings!
05/22/19
Nice free verse. Imagery is well done: it’s easy to visualize. And congratulations!!