The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/19
You captured well the raw emotion and wrote with transparency. I could feel your emotional journey from sadness to joy. Well done.
Wow, goose-bump inducing story. Spot on topic-well done!
Excellent job of pulling the reader into the scene. This is touching with a great ending. Kudos.
This story touches a spot in my heart. I was 18 when I told my mom I was pregnant. Her first words to me were harsh. Those first few months were hard, but I knew she still loved me even though I had disappointed her. Later after my daughter was born, Mom talked about how much a beautiful blessing she had become. This story has a great message. Parents and kids both make mistakes, but we love through those mistakes. Nice job.
You did an excellent job of showing the challenge topic and showing forgiveness.
Captivating story telling. Well done
Blessings
Congratulations on you EC! Happy Dance!
Congratulations!!!
Karlene,

This was an interesting take on the topic. The mother's love for her daughter shines through.

Congratulations on the EC Award. Well deserved.
05/30/19
You made me cry! Beautiful writing, and a well-deserved EC. <3