The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/19
Love your alliteration. I kept reading Beezie-Bob as Beelzebub. lol. He will get his just rewards. This was fun to read. Great job.
This was a fun read. I can see it being used in a children's ministry. Loved the ending.
This is an awesome take on an old-fashioned fable. Your name selections were simply brilliant and had me grinning. You did an excellent job of writing on topic, but in a fun and fresh way. The ending was great and delighted me thoroughly. You kind of doubled up on the topic with that ending. I think Aesop would be proud of this creation. The Bible verse is a great connection to your message as well.
Fun! Blessings
05/14/19
You had me hooked from the first word of the title and the story didn't disappoint. What an ending. Well done.
I love the fun and the alliteration--and the lesson! Very clever!
05/16/19
Congratulations! I love this. So much fun with a lot of truth. Way to go :-)
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
05/16/19
This is a delightful mix of humor and wisdom with a clever ending. Loved it!
Congratulations! Blessings!
Barabara,

This was a whale of a tale. Very clever story.

Congratulations on your EC award.