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04/26/19
Powerful story of God at work.
Fascinating story! I was kind of disappointed that it was fiction- it could have happened! Well done!
04/26/19
Great story. Sadly - so many people are caught up in bondage to witch doctors. I loved that God showed those people who the true God is with you using the picture of fresh water from the ground.
This story based on a missionary John Paton in the New Hebrides.

Before he arrived at the island, the natives were cannibals. After he served, most of the islanders became Christians.

The chief did accept Christ.

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04/27/19
Wow! This was powerful.
Praise God...thanks for sharing.
God bless~
This is a great story with quite a few conflicts introduced right away. I liked Conflict against nature, against man, and against the evil one. You showed how faith can pull us trough tough times. Good job.
05/02/19
I love that the missionary will not be frightened, bullied, or talked down by the witch doctor. God shows up. This was fun to read. I can imagine what comes next. The witch doctor is no more to be seen, and revival comes to the land. :) Great job.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards. Happy Dance!
05/05/19
Congratulations on placing 6th in the Advanced division.

God is definitely at work around the world.